tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8044318176622758692.post7577594485412033156..comments2024-03-01T03:51:38.081-05:00Comments on Allergic to Bull: My Opposition to Convicted (and Admitted) Forgerer Brett Kimberlin’s Motion for Leave to AmendA.W.http://www.blogger.com/profile/10876021589516844048noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8044318176622758692.post-22530506275697144042014-03-26T15:32:57.439-04:002014-03-26T15:32:57.439-04:00I'll be honest, I don't think it was that ...I'll be honest, I don't think it was that good. Sorry.<br /><br />You've got the right facts in there, but it's overly wordy on some points (specifically the multitude of errors) and woefully brief in others. You're lacking organization, both in specific sections and overall.<br /><br />Basically, good facts, good law, needs better writing. I know you can do better, some of your previous motions were very good. Hope to see more of that in the future.<br /><br />I understand that you were probably rushed putting this together.egdnoreply@blogger.com